Take my heart[♥]

by Catastrophic Beauty   Dec 4, 2006


Take my ripped and tainted heart
Glue it back together with your lies
Bruise me with your scornful touch
Gaze deeply into my tortured eyes

Feel my heart beat out of my chest
As my salty lips tremble with pain
Drown me in the pool of my blood
While you slash and slit my last vein
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  • 17 years ago

    by La La xx Beth

    Very nice. one of the best ive seen so far. keep up the writing! and thanks for the comment.

    ♥Beth

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Wow this was different to ur other two poems ive read.. this was poerful but and i liked the words u used. keep it up. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    This is excellent. I love it. So emotional. 5/5
    -Vino

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    I love this! Your poems are always soo well thought out! I love it!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Keath

    I really like the poem and the story you are trying to tell with it but somehow I can’t get in.
    The rhyme is good, the ending as well and I do like it. So 4/5

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