Its very deep and powerful and inspiring, but why the title donkey? i think you need a title that strikes someones interest, just saying but i really love this poem, VERY WELL WRITTEN!!! come check out mine titled " Thank You" i think youll like it.
Love: Kamille

I absolutely loved it!! That was the most heartfelt, honest poem I have ever read. Shakespear lookout! I love you and I miss you more than ever.

Awesome! a very inspiring poems

god bless!

Kamille,

Donkey (a "rear") describes how I feel -

Can you imagine, living 28 years searching - for someone, always looking.. dreaming.. hoping but always feeling a longing? Knowing, full well, that life just doesnt have any meaning - and feeling completely, and desperately alone.

Even to the point that you attempt to force the deep bond in the relationships you\\\'ve had? Somewhere knowing, deep down, that its not there- its not going to work but denying it - with every inch of you because you so deeply wish it to be? Waking every day to the dyscord, a sour note, which reverberates off the walls of your soul with tremendous force.

Only to realize the opportunities in the past that were there - and everything that you wished, was right in front of you. But because you failed to act - failed to reach out, failed to be sincere that you could have very easily let something beautiful slip by?

Indeed, donkey is me!

Thank you very much for your kind words - I appreciate and hope my title bears more meaning.

-V

God, I miss you so much..it hurts. You have made me a better person, because you see me. The reflection of me I see through you forces me to the the soul in everyone. You are my epiphany, you are my every thing, my heart and my soul

I meant to say the reflection of me I see through you forces me to see the soul in everyone. I love you so much and I miss you

Why do you have to be soooo perfect?

Oh my GOD I am about to cry!! I just wrote you a poem and the stupid system erased it when I tried to submit it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm sorry... I love you and I will go ahead and write another one

The poem was about how I am scared of this because noone could possibly be as perfect as you and still be a man!! jk still be human
dammit

Read my latest poem!! its to u

Im not perfect -

your just perfect for me!

I bite my lip, I miss you so much -
hard enough, I may leave a scar

thank you.
thank you.
soo much for seeing me
and knowing me

ditto - Im a better person around you.
I cant help it. You glow.

I miss u so much

I have to see you I miss you so much. I will try to make it there tonight

I love you so much and its at 100 percent now. I really need to see you

Read 05.06.04 I think you would like it I loved it

Hey !! I'm talkin to you mister.. you need to write to me
I haven't had a party since I last saw you and that sucks!

My eueidestatos!

never fear - if you want me all you ever have to do is reach out to me. Ill be there.

I reach out to you, all the time. Irregardless of company.

I miss you,
I've been missing you forever.

"The opposite of fear"
"Is love"

Where did she go?