Beautiful poem. i can almost see the ballerina dancing. great word choice. 5/5

That was an amazing poem! I could see the ballerina dancnig in my mind becauase you used your words really well. 5/5 keep up the good work!

Very sweet poem. but i dont think it as one of your best. i do not have a specific reason persay. but it just didnt seem amazing to me. it doesn't deserve a 4.0 though. so i will upvote it.. i do think that you shoudl reread this one. work on it a little. some of the lines seem long. or something. i can't i dont know. grr. its just something about it. =\

x3Lauren

Basicly i think you can do better.