Piercing Light. {Quatrain}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Dec 4, 2006


Piercing through forbidding skies,
Hope prevails, an interest to eyes,
Faithless ones look above to see,
What cannot, willnot be believed.

Beauty bright and strong way up high,
Piercing through forbidding skies,
Gloomy and dark peaking around,
A dear precious rainbow is found.

Sailing colors will soon display,
Of love; take the darkness away.
Piercing through forbidding skies,
This rainbow wakes up, now alive.

Shuddering, exposing a light,
Happy, yet gentle it is bright,
The rainbow is free - darkness dies,
Piercing through forbidding skies.

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A Quatrain is a poem consisting of four lines of verse with a specific rhyming scheme.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Very nicely written. the flow was very good and most of your rhymes as well. the only problem i have with it is that you used the rhyme 'i' in every stanza. it seemed a little too pushed, i did like hwo you used 'skies' stnaza 1 line 1, s2l2, s3l3, and s4l4, i thoguth that was cool. but i think you could have been more creativce in your rhyming.. =]

    x3Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    This the best out of the three poems I read. The style fit perfectly. You may want to recheck your spelling.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Great poem. Beautiful imagery!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    Again great work using your words. It's amazing how you can paint the picture of the rainbow in my mind. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Beautiful poem. i love the style you used. i can almost see the rainbwo. i love this poem. another 5/5

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