Beautiful poem. i love the style you used. i can almost see the rainbwo. i love this poem. another 5/5

Again great work using your words. It's amazing how you can paint the picture of the rainbow in my mind. 5/5

Great poem. Beautiful imagery!
Charisma*

This the best out of the three poems I read. The style fit perfectly. You may want to recheck your spelling.

Very nicely written. the flow was very good and most of your rhymes as well. the only problem i have with it is that you used the rhyme 'i' in every stanza. it seemed a little too pushed, i did like hwo you used 'skies' stnaza 1 line 1, s2l2, s3l3, and s4l4, i thoguth that was cool. but i think you could have been more creativce in your rhyming.. =]

x3Lauren