Impossible Love

by Delie   Dec 4, 2006


Impossible Love

Impossible Love.
A girl's broken heart still beats,
Boy finds another.

Impossible Love.
Boy fights alot with new girl,
Girl silently cries.

Impossible Love.
Girl still loves the boy dearly,
Boy remembers her.

Impossible Love.
Boy wants her, the one he lost,
Girl can't forgive him.

Impossible Love.
Girl and Boy love eachother,
Can't be together...

IMPOSSIBLE LOVE.

~~I wrote every verse like a Haiku/Senryu (Haiku is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5/7/5).), but to me it just didn't seem complete, so I wrote a whole poem.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Cool poem. It has a strong message in it to me. Don't leave nothing you love. Great job. 5/5
    -vino

  • 17 years ago

    by XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX

    Hmmm...this was very creative...i'm partial to haiku because i think they're so small and delicate with a whole lot of meaning...i liked the Impossible love theme...great job
    Jonda Mullins

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I really liked this poem. It's strong and flows nicely. I like how you took a bunch of senryus and made one poem. [They're not haikus for the reason Lauren stated above] But call it whatever you want it's nice piece of poetry. :] 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked this I didnt understand the flow but thats beside the point I once knew was this girl/you were going thru nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    This is good nice job!!
    5/5
    *kaila*

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