I can relate to this.
Brilliant emotion seemed to be poured into this
Well done =)
5/5
*Gem*

Hey Ariel i think this poem i really really good keep it up =)

This is a heart felt write. The love and tenderness can be felt in the read. I hope that this love will last. Great Job!

sadaddy

Hey ariel...this poem is so beautiful....i loved it...im amazed u can put on paper how u feel...i wish i could do that too...but reading ur poem...touched my heart..cus ur poem is how i feel bout my bf...anyways keep writing poems ur great at it...and ill be sure to read them and comment..

That was so sweet

So sweet n touchy words dear...5/5

God bless u