Kiss of Steel

by Fixxxer   Dec 4, 2006


Come sink with me in my pool of despair.
Let the darkness fill your lungues if you dare.
Feel all my pain and taste my tragedy.
Hear your pulse fade as you die inside of me.
Open your eyes and see nothing but black;
reminding you of everything that you lack.
Playful days and the colours of autumn.
Memories of light never reaching the bottom.
Realize there is no hope for the hopeless
and no existence of death for the lifeless.
For the heart may beat while the soul sleeps
and a face may smile while the mind weeps.
But one cold truth that's evidentily real
is the bittersweet soothing kiss of steel.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, every line of this piece is so powerful, absolutely effective. The atmosphere that you created is so dark, with excellent and vivid imagery. Whole piece is captivating, from the beginning to the end.
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by heather

    Wow i love the flow of words so depressing but thats okay because its a style and sometimes we all feel kinda down. ;) awesumneees!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashlee

    WOW..way to go , u have me speechless..and trust me it takes alot to make me speechless!! lol .. i like ur poem! ALOT! 5*5 =D

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    Wow, that is dark.
    but surprisingly enlightening. That's real good, I can't describe the feeling I had when I read it. Keep it up!

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