Wow, that is dark.
but surprisingly enlightening. That's real good, I can't describe the feeling I had when I read it. Keep it up!

WOW..way to go , u have me speechless..and trust me it takes alot to make me speechless!! lol .. i like ur poem! ALOT! 5*5 =D

Wow i love the flow of words so depressing but thats okay because its a style and sometimes we all feel kinda down. ;) awesumneees!

Wow, every line of this piece is so powerful, absolutely effective. The atmosphere that you created is so dark, with excellent and vivid imagery. Whole piece is captivating, from the beginning to the end.
5/5 from me