Maybe It's You (Terzanelle)

by Italian Stallion   Dec 4, 2006


Maybe it's you
Or maybe it's me
But then again who knows...it's just a big mess

We never agree
What to do anymore
Or maybe it's me

I guess I just have to explore
For I just don't know
What to do anymore

I am no pro
We both know this
For I just don't know

If we can ever be in a heavenly bliss
Like old times, and
We both know this

But give it a chance
To prove it true,
Let's progress
In our romance

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

~Written for a contest~

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A Terzanelle is a 19 line poem consisting of five interlocking triplets plus a concluding quatrain in which the first and third lines of the triplet appear as refrains. The middle line of each triplet is a repetent reappearing as the last line of the succeeding triplet with the exception of the next-to-last stanza which appears in the quatrain. Rhyme scheme - ABC BDB DED EFE FGF HACH.
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  • 18 years ago

    by Bryan

    This seems like a hard style to do, but you did great, 5/5!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Good poem, this one sort of interlocks with the other two...I can't remember their names. Hopefully you know which ones I am talking about. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I like the real voice i hear, its coming from a strong person and how your title kinda contridicts yet agrees with your poem. excelent job.

    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Very wonderful poem Joe.
    I gave a five :]

    Love it.

    Take care,
    N-G-C-S.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow, this was beautiful.
    My favourite part was

    But give it a chance
    To prove it true,
    Let's progress
    In our romance

    That really hit me hard.

    I enjoyed the wording and imagery muchly.