Very nicely done n thnks for explaining abt ur poem types really helps

GOd bless u

Wow, this was beautiful.
My favourite part was

But give it a chance
To prove it true,
Let's progress
In our romance

That really hit me hard.

I enjoyed the wording and imagery muchly.

Very wonderful poem Joe.
I gave a five :]

Love it.

Take care,
N-G-C-S.

I like the real voice i hear, its coming from a strong person and how your title kinda contridicts yet agrees with your poem. excelent job.

lissa

Good poem, this one sort of interlocks with the other two...I can't remember their names. Hopefully you know which ones I am talking about. 5/5

This seems like a hard style to do, but you did great, 5/5!!!