Comments : Moving On

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Its seems like love
    Is just good-byes
    Breaking hearts
    And tears that won't dry

    ^ that was a nice stanza. I think your poem rhymes perfectly, though your last stanza doesn't seem to fit the upset feeling of the rest of the poem, though I do like it's a happy ending in a sense. Nice job!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by IdaLia

    ,&*@%$! rite baq 2 u