I absolutely adore this poem. It portrays the emotions of true love and it is very beautifully written. You definitely did an amazing job putting your emotions into words. The reader can feel the love that you have for this person. The flow was very good and held up extremely well. I've always found that hard to do with the longer lines, but you did a really good job on it. And your rhyming didn't seem forced at all :) Great job on this! 5/5

I think this poem was great it put a smile on my face fantastic job well done.

I am lost for words
it was excellent well written and beautiful i honestly love it

I am lost for words
it was excellent well written and beautiful i honestly love it

HOLY CROW THIS IS AMAZING!!! i ADORE this!!!!!! it flows Perfectly and the lines are simply amazing... adding you to favorites as we speak! so i can read some more of these amazing poems because this one was Great!!!!! good work!! 10 out of 5!!!!

Emily

Very god dude keep up the good work...you are very inspirational to me... i love all of your poems...i have a few of my own... maybe you can read them.

This is a very wonderful poem. You have a remarkable talent. Excellent writing. This is truely a classic. Look forward to reading more of your poems.

Oh my god this is more beautiful then words could ever explain you are such a beautiful writer and when i read your master pieces the words just come to life in my head and the emotions i can feel as well its not often you read a piece of writing that can do that

Omg that was so beautiful! i loved this poem! it was soo beautiful! every line was just heart warming. it was lovely and sweet! great job i really enjoyed reading this. thank u so much for ur comment on my poem. meant alot. =)

Best Wishes for a Merry Christmas
Dora xx

Beautiful piece of work, you filled it will a lot of emotion and the word choice is great! 5/5 Keep it up

LOVE IT!!! You're a great poet! Keep up the awesome work!

Dear friend

I am sorry for missing out this one! A very lovely piece - almost made me make a tune in mind. I must say your descriptions are very vivid - that really speaks of talent. Am sure you'll go a long way!!

thanks always for commenting on my work.

good luck and peace
shobhana

You are amazing !!! im speechless.id only dream of writing poetry like that well done !!!!! lisa1983

Great job on that poem....really liked it...you need more emotion from the heart tho

Wow Sisco... you never cease to amaze me with your works! That was absolutely fantastic!

I am IN LOVE with this. Keep up the amazing work :)