Yup this is pretty cool and has inspired my to create somthing about the weather as it plays a major part in our life today as global warming is become more apparent yer good write well written xxx alex xxx (4)

Now this poem was good! So far on your list it's the best one I've read you had great words and imagery and it was really good nice job!

I like this free verse style. It was very vivd and describtive. I think you did a good job. Thanks for all your comments. i am sorry I didn't get to them sooner, I haven't been on line for a couple of days.

So far I liked this one the best. I actullay felt like I was in a rain storm. the words were vivid, and so beautiful. Great job 5/5

I loved your use of color words... They provide such vivid images.

I was wondering, did you mean to say "quakes" or is it really "quacks?"

Just checking in on that.
My only suggestion for this one is to elaborate more on the conclusion... Although it reads fine and all, it doesn't quite match up to the awesomeness of your poem.
Plus, it's a rather cliche ending.

But, do as you wish.
Loved it, thanks for sharing!

Amazing poem, you truly have a talent, keep up the superb work, you're doing. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

This poem was very descriptive.. I was able to see the image.. and I relaly like that.. you showed a really creative side of you on this poem.. job well done 5/5

I just loved you this poem. image was so good. aswell words you have used in it take care 5/5

Dang i have always wanted to write a poem about nature and i could not even get it this close nice job amazing work-
raindrops 5/5

Does the ground really quack? Lol. That's like a duck silly. ^_^ You mean quake. :D And you mean ground not groaned. :)

Other than that I loved picturing it all. Reminds me of a poem I did. Someone really disliked it for some reason though. I don't see why I liked mine quite a bit and so did a few others. it's called When Black and White is Beautiful. Seeing how you do a lot on nature I'd like you to check it out. Well I enjoyed this one. It was fun to imagine and so true! Isn't it weird how sometimes storms clear up just like that *snaps*? Well I'll give this one a four. Good job.

In Stanza #2 you have "quacks" and i think it should be "quakes" just a small typographical error..we all make them.

"The thunder rolls,
and the ground quacks,"

other than that good poem

Stanza #3 line 3 "than" should be "then"

and also in stanza 3 you want to keep the same verb agreement and change "could" to "can" to keep everything in present tense

and stanza #4 line 5 "groaned" should possibly be "ground"

but again this is a very good poem just some things that need to be edited and all of these errors i'm sure i'm guilty of as well so nothing to worry about.
5/5

I like this poem cause it's really detailed Nice one
Great job to

Very nice read. It was definitely a change from your usual type of poem, and it was quite refreshing.

There was one part of the poem that really just made me think "HUH?" and it was "and the ground quacks," the ground quacks? do you mean quakes? as in like an earth quake? cause I've never heard of an earth quacking. I've seen some quacks....but never heard the earth being one. hahah. :D little humor in the comment.

I really like this poem and gave it a five. Other than the quacking earth this poem was very well done.

5/5