by LadyPearl
Hey, thanks a lot for your comment. It's refreshing to not get a one-liner. Though I did forget...what contest was it that you held? |
by *Charisma*
I just wanted to say you gave me the LONGEST quote i KNOW i've ever gotten, and I've ever seen on this site. But it was much appreciated, and I did change one of the lines, not with what you used, though it was an excellent suggestion, but I wanted it to come from me. I'm going to have to reread it to know what else I should change, and I totally understand how you can love a poem, but still see what needs to be changed, so I will do the same for you if ever I notice anything. Thank you, |
by Midnight Sun
I know this is the last comment I'm supposed to give for the contest but I'll definately be back to comment on more. Great job and I look forward to reading more. I love your work. |
by *Charisma*
Hey This is Charisma*. I wanted to say thanks for the comments you left, but I was wondering if you were going to do the final three. I hadn't seen them, and was just wondering. Thank you though for the EXTREMELY in depth comments thus far, and I look forward to more! |
I really enjoyed this poem. It was written wonderfully, i really enjoyed the style of it. You used quotes that weve all probably heared of, and made them into a great poem! It had a good flow, and you could imagine someone saying all those quotes. It also had a great ending, powerful. Keep it up, looking forward to reading more! xx |