View of Betrayal

by katrina   Dec 4, 2006


She walked away into herself but found she didn't want the help. That feeling was all temporary, she broke apart in front of me. She felt her fate run through her bones, she screamed in pain in freakish tones. She bit her lip and cried her tears. It took a lot to face her fears. She picked her heart up off the ground; she crept through pain with no sound. The pain took over and she lost her hope, her broken heart just could not cope. The seed was planted and she almost gave up. She tried to end it, but it did not stop. Her heart went cold and she ran away but her fears would not stray. She called for help and it was given and a few weeks later she was half forgiven. She's ready for love, so she lies in wait but their betrayal she'll always hate.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    I like it. :) It was really good. Thank you for your comment. :) I'll comment more of your poetry as soon as I have time... take care. :) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by katrina

    This was done because someone hurt me really bad. I hope everyone enjoys it.