Beautiful poem. I love it. It has great word choice and a gooflow to it. Keep up the good work:) 5/5

Very beautiful.

"Walks on the beach, an endless walk,"

This was the only line I didn't particularly like, due to the repetition of 'walk'. It made it sound awkward. If you changed the second 'walk' to something else, it would be a lot better.

Anyhow, very good. 5/5.

Walks on the beach, an endless walk,

this one line I think you could use revision so that walk isn't used twice.

Going down the beach, an endless walk

Maybe like that. But other than that, this was so beautiful and I loved it. It's one of the best poems I've read today. Good job!
Charisma*

That is a really good poem. You rhymed really well, but it's so weird cause I have one almost exactly like it! It's called creating memories. I'd love it if you checked it out!
~Midnight Sun

I liked your poem - nice and sweet... May love treat you kindly.

Awww.. this is so cute and romantic i lovelovelove love it! hehe :]P and i espescially love this line "Going down the beach, an endless walk,
No need for words, no need to talk"

its so cute idk why lol i just really like this poem