This Fake Smile...

by xInvisiblex   Dec 4, 2006


You could never see...
What I hide behind me.
Fears made, and hopes broken.
Screams, and cries never spoken.
I know you think I'm happy.
I didn't want you all to worry.
I'm very sorry.
When you read this please don't cry.
I'll be happy soon I promise.

*This is the first poem I've submitted here, and I'm new here, so please tell me what I do wrong, So I can work on it...thanks ^^*

©DeAndra S.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Heidi Harover

    I really liked your poem. It was good, sort of a different style than others. Keep writing:)

    ,Heidi

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason

    As a first post or for any post for that matter it is very good. You wrote from the heart and it shows.

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