This was an amazing piece. Definitely one of your better recent ones. Just great!
Charisma*

Perhaps one day i'll have the strengh to right a poem like this, but for the moment im just fooing myself :)) fantastic write Gemma as always the more i read the more i am impresed by your words :)

U really got a very motivational message in this one...and i hope people understand this.

great write indeed

all the best and take care

Great

You go girl....

I LOVED IT SOOOO GOOD

You go girl. =D Magnificent.

JOB well DONE i love the flow of the poem gurlie keep writin and you let him kno that he is JUST a guy and they cant bring you down stand tall gurl till you find the one worth fallin for *hugs* lynzie kae

Omg this poem i so awesome

Great poem! I wish I could write something that would get 100 votes! Congrats!

I like this. ive had some guys that are like this and all i can say is hold your head up and put one foot forward at all times. good work!!

That was a very powerful and also beautiful poem!! its great that you feel this way. i hope one day i can have this feeling also...5/5 keep it up
~lilia~

Nice poem
has alot of meaning
real nice :) 5/5

Hey... i really like this. the strength and power behind it "saying that your okay and can move on" you go girl. nice poem!

You go girl....nice poem to encourage strength....after a heartbreak

Sad poem with the positive note. Nicely written, well done.

I'm never going to hurt you, so this poem won't ever come true for you
Love you xx

You know, i love people that are strong, and i can see from your poem that you are very strong, and you don't let anything get you down.
this poem was awesome, it flowed well, had good wording, imagery was great and i loved it.
well done
xxxxxxx

I love this poem...it shows that ur not gonna let him or whoever control you...5/5 keep up the good work!!
xoxo am

GREAT POEM! i loved it. it just flows so well. i can really relate...unfortunately.lol. keep it up girl!