Comments : Best friends

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    It was a very sweet poem.
    when times got rough you and i stood near
    never to far to dry away one anothers tears
    those were sweet lines. I think your line about how no one can understand how your hearts together mend, should be shorter so it flows better, but overall it's pretty good.
    Charisma*