You reall do miss him dont you. well he's in a better place hunni... watching over you everyday. but i really did like this poem... very touching

Hey i read your profile and my heart went out to you. thanks for leaving coments on my poems and y7our poem is amazing and deep. i can feel your pain and i wish you the best. i understand what its like to loose someone you love. keep writing xoxo

I am so sorry for your loss but truly i can feel the same pain from when a really good friend of mine passed away. This poem brought tears to my eyes i love how you ended it!! best of luck in the future!!
~Kelsey

Your poems are astonishing!
i love them, they just fill me with emotion...the way it seems you've poured your heart out into them.
you've done some incredible work.
xx

Beautiful. Stay strong. And thankyou for your kind comment on my own poem. Well written keep it up 5*

Cindy, It is so hard to remember John. Just hold his memory close to your heart and thank God for letting you have him for so long. Many will never know the kind of love you two shared. You were blessed.

Amazing use of words. Seems a bit choppy, but that could be the way I read it. Very well written.

I'm so sorry about your loss
such sadness in every word
pain in every stanza
but well expressed
thank you for sharing
hope someday you feel better inside
love
~tish~

That poem comes from the heart. It's sad and You're really something to pull through tough times like you're going through. I probably don't understand the half of it but by what I know, I can see that you are strong, your story touches me greatly and I hope for you things are getting better. Keep it up, stay strong.

Good poem, I'm sorry for your lose.
And thanks for the comment.
Good job 5/5

WOW.... THATS ALL I GOT 2 SAY.. UR POEM REALLY TOUCHED ME DEEP. IT ACTUALLY MADE ME CRY... UR AWESOME.. I HOPE THINGS GET BETTER 4 U SWEETIE..

Aww....this is so sad...i loved it...again you put so much emotion into you poem...another excellent job...5/5.

Great poem.
im so sorry about i think
it was your father.
correct me if im wrong
it hurts to watch someone suffer .

The hardest day of our lives played back. very good poem. I truely know at least a big part of the sadness you feel. The longer it is the more you heal. but all the wounds never truely heal. keep up your writing it is very good.

I am so sorry for your loss...this poem really made me feel your pain though...great job with expressing yourself and stay strong!!

Beautiful way to put it. Keep your head held high and Always remember that God gives us nothing we can't handle. You're in my prayers.....Breathe easy.

Aww i am sooo sorry for your loss! keep goin strong k.. this poem is amazing it's so great you are getting it all out on paper.. this is a poem you need 2 keep your whole life!

p.s thanks for the comments!! they have really encouraged me! xx

I'd let the tears flow but i don't want my teachers coming over..
But what an emotional write.. and such a tribute to a man who you shared so much with..
You did a wonderful job in writing this..
Well done..
5/5
*Gem*

I like this a lot its put together very well nice job 5/5

Aww I am so sorry for your loss, but it seems you loved him alot and he loved you. Im sure hes in heaven watching over you right now just be strong, use that strength he gave you to go on each day. Great beautiful poem.