YOU STILL...

by TeAr dROp   Dec 4, 2006


As tears roll on by
All I can do is think about you
Even If you never think about me
You still live in my thoughts
As I close my eyes
Your face hunts me to this day
Even if I'm never in your heart
You still have a part in me
As I walk on by
All I talk about is you
Even if you forgot about me
You still live in my memories

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  • 17 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    Awww.. the way i feel.. 5/5!! even tho i hate my memories!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I found this very sweet and touching, it made me smile.
    I thought the rhymes were sometimes cliche, but apart from that, you did a good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    This poem was abit cliche and a tad bit too short to really reviel any detail...but the wording gave it a very cute sence and made it a nice pleasant read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I loved this poem. I can relate because my boyfriend brock up with me and that is how I feel. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Synh

    Aww....so sweet... i dont usually enjoy reading free verse but this is an exception especially since I can relate to it. Great job! One of your best! 5/5

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