Wow...i really like your poems they are very good it make me think about myself....

Everything will be alright,
Everything will be okay.
Hold on, Just hold on,
Another day

i like this line alot because it make me feel like when your down just read this poem and it will make you happy!!!this poem was great keep up the good work!!!!
-teardrop

It is great. you are a great song writer and poet. Keep up the great work.5/5

Very nice write. I loved it. The flow was good as well as the structure. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Awesome =] you're a really good writer. I wish i could write song lyrics! this is amaaazing. It really shows your love for your friends =]

Very nice i think your niche is more lyrics than poems. lol. the only thing is that it is slightly.. hum. well it reminds me /alot/ of two songs -move along(AAR) and Hold On(GC) i dont know if it was for a contest and that was part of it. but i think (if it wasnt) you shoudl try not to do that so much. or try to strayaway from that. it could cause people to think ur plagarizing.

x3~Lauren

I liked this, I found it to be very inspiring.
I enjoyed the repetition of the lyrics, and I think you did a very good job.

Hey i just read your poem and i thought that it was very good. uve got alot of talent.

This is from a song right???

Great poem, it is one of a kind poem keep up the great work!

These were really good lyrics.