WOW! This was another great poem! You have such a way with rhythm and rhyme. Hats of to ya!
Charimsa*

Debbie I feel so bad for you! it makes me cry to feel how sad you are! At least you still have him. Good poem!

Its so difficult to be away from the ppl we love/care about for a few days let alone months and years i feel your pain excellent 5/5

This is so sad and heartbreaking-I can really feel this.I admire your honesty and emotion.

Gary Jurechka

Thank you so much for commenting on y poetry. Two reasons:

1] I really appreciate that someone enjoyed it enough to comment on it,

and

2] It gave me a chance to read yours. I doubt if I would have found you had you not visited me first.

I believe we are kindred spirits. We share the same wisdom that age has brought. You have written this piece with such passion and grace.

The flow was exception and the messager heartfelt. A very beautiful write.

Happiness
Jeannie

Very good work. not my style but i can always appreciate good work.

BEAUTIFUL VERSES YOU POTRAY OVER THE ROOM, THOUGH SAD, BUT... SPILLING OUT INTO THE YARD, THE VERSES OF POETRY WRITTEN HERE, EACH ONE STRIKING A CHORD. YET YOU EXPRESSIONS OF FANCIFUL FEELINGS, FLOATING AROUND BY THE SCORE, YOUR WORDS ARE RICH. AS YOUR HEART LIKE A GOLD.... SO BEAUTIFUL INSIDE...YET FLOWED WITHIN BEAUTIFUL EMOTIONS, LIGHT AS A CLOUD STIR LOVE ON INTO THE NIGHT, YOU INK, YOUR PEN IN THE WELL OF YOUR HEART, YOUR WORDS TOUCHING THE READER....ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL....EMOTIONS PENNED.. WHAT ELSE I CAN SAY HERE DEAR FRIEND.... MARVELLOUS! ANYWAY, THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR VISIT MY STUFF AND TAKE A TIME TO LEAVE YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENT... THANKS YOU SO MUCH, I REALLY APPRECIATED!

I WISH YOU AND EACH OF YOUR LOVED ONES HAVE MANY WONDERFUL BLESSING...TAKE CARE... BEST WISHES FROM WEST.

BERT ~

Beautifully sad poem. The lonliness could be felt. I have been in a relationship like this...it's far from easy. So, I understand all the different emotions you go through.

Take care & good luck

Aww. Sad poem and very nicely written. I'm going through this right now and it is so unbearable.

Good Luck!

That was soo cute abd sad @ the same time//
love suks but, thats the way life gose

This was an incredible poem :)

Beautiful and unique just like my mother. I love all your poems mom and I love you!

This was heartbreaking. But an amazing piece. I don't even know what to say. I can tell it's something so hard to go through, when you have feelings for someone who you're not with anymore. Beautiful write! God bless.

-` Poetess

Seems there is so much talent around!
I like John's poems now discovered yours.....what can I say!
All beautiful and really good..lost for words....Barry

Awwwwwwwww this is soooooo sad...and such a heartbreak...its a really good poem.

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