Outside of making some different changes in the structure (like putting 'of tyrant blue' in 2nd stanza as one complete line-which would make this great description/image stand out more) this piece is really outstanding. Overall a good flow, some excellent imagery, great word usage, and very well conveyed emotion of love and contentment. A great piece!

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

P.S.
-Love the ending lines!

Gary J