Is 'will' supposed to be well? I wish you 'will' sounds kinda....wrong. I didnt like the repition of 'I hate' during the first stanza. You can exchange the word 'hate' for other words like 'despise' or' destest'. same tihng with love. The last stanza doesnt fit the flow of the rest of the poem either. I like your idea but you should come back and work on this. It has much potential. 4/5

I really liked this poem. I can relate to it. keep up the good work. 5/5

I loved your consept of how the more you love something them ore you hate it and the more you hate something the more you love it..therefore showing us the interconnection..very nice..but i think the poem could have done without the "dude"..cause that ruined the whole wording for me:)

Oh yea!!! i love this one!! 5/5... love to hate..hate to love chick!!!! awsome work

This is a good poem, i liked how everything wrapped up in the end, and your scheme was really lovely as well.