Glowing Embers

by goddess-glamourpuss   Dec 4, 2006


Fire burns brightly
day and night
illuminating hearth
with warming glow.
Time passes.
Hearth grows dim
only token fuel added.
Once great pyre
reduced to ashes.
Yet
is there hope
for as coals are raked
once again
faintly
glowing embers

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Very vivid. the imaginary seemed to come alive off the screen.

    The flow went well also.

    --Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Nicely written, short and nice choice of words. I thought the structure was a little off, I think it would be better if you broke it up into stanzas, but that's just my opinion.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    I like the structure and the meaning a lot..the title is v intriguing

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