This was very dark and sad. Well written though, i could feel the emotion. 5/5

This was really dark and sad. It had a strong ending, great descriptions [you are very good at them], a great flow, and is really unique. I love everything about it. Keep it up hun, you have so much talent! 5/5

Tammie xo

This was so sad. but, i still liked it. it was wonderfully written. there are not too many poems that do not rhyme that i just fall in love with.
great job.
5/5

This could go in a number of catagories..
It was so bittersweet with a tinge of sadness, mixed with a chilling darkness.
Excellent wording
5/5
*Gem*