Comments : My Broken Angel

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Very sad, but great job. Wonderfully written. Great emotion :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Hey! I haven't heard from you for a while. Thanks for commenting my poems, I really appreciate it. Anyway, back to your poem, this is AMAZING! The flow was great, and the descriptions were so well written, this created beautiful imagery. I could clearly imagine this broken angel. A lovely poem hun! Definately 5/5, it deserves no less!

    Tammie xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Oh wow. this poem was beautifully written. i loved your choice of words & the flow. there's nothing i could try to change about it. when i read about the angel i thought about a character from my favorite video game [Sephiroth from FFVII] & mannnn it made it better! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Aww wow.. that was so beautiful.. and yet so bittersweet.
    I love poems about angels and the phrase 'broken angel' could raise so many different meanings..
    Excellent piece
    5/5
    *Gem*