by Chelsey
Very sad, but great job. Wonderfully written. Great emotion :] |
by Tammie
Hey! I haven't heard from you for a while. Thanks for commenting my poems, I really appreciate it. Anyway, back to your poem, this is AMAZING! The flow was great, and the descriptions were so well written, this created beautiful imagery. I could clearly imagine this broken angel. A lovely poem hun! Definately 5/5, it deserves no less! |
by Jenni
Oh wow. this poem was beautifully written. i loved your choice of words & the flow. there's nothing i could try to change about it. when i read about the angel i thought about a character from my favorite video game [Sephiroth from FFVII] & mannnn it made it better! 5/5 |
by Gem
Aww wow.. that was so beautiful.. and yet so bittersweet. |