She's Bleeding

by Kristina   Dec 4, 2006


On the inside she's bleeding,
Slowly each and every day,
But now she's bleeding faster,
And she might not make it to stay.

Everyone's praying for her,
To get better real soon,
But she is only getting worse,
Cutting more and more is what she'll do.

Her pain is unbearable,
And no one knows the truth,
About what she has been through,
And what goes on in her home.

Copyright © August 16, 2005 - Kristina M
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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I found this to be very sad.
    The flow threw me off at times, because of the way it sometimes rhymed and sometimes didn't, but apart from that, it was a beautifully written sad piece of poetry.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    I just wrote a long comment but my fricken stupid father got on and it is gone. so i really do not care.
    in short-
    good, not great. dissapearence of rhyme scheme messed up the flow. i think that needs to be changed, along with this line -
    Cutting more and more is what she'll do.
    it irks me i dont like it. but now i gtg again. sorry.

    x3 Lauren

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