Comments : School

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. I can agree with this one. I like it. Another 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Eh. i dont like it. i liked the beginning.. but it stopped flowing mid 2nd stanza. whered the rs fly off to? xD
    i do think this could use work. and shouldnt be in funny lol. 'tisnt very funny. lol

    x3 Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    I like the idea, and agree, but it needs a better flow and a more consistent rhyme scheme. :)

    -Athamae

  • 17 years ago

    by leinhart

    Nice one hehe
    schols re not meant for everyone!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Hehe. I think that we all feel this way about school at one point in our lives. Especially the boredom. =] Great job, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by masked_senses

    Plz die...