Great poem. I can relate. I loved this poem. Never stop writing:) 5/5

Overall not Bad.
I think this could definantly be improved. Try using more adult words,.

i'll finish this comment asap. but i gtg. sorry.

*rereads*

Actually this isnt bad at all. i kinda sounded that way didnt i? lol. sorry. its good. i think it could use longer more adult words but its good. i like the topic alot. its well written and flows nice.

a few lil probs/things'
Things that happen to me,
Almost every day.
this is a fragment.. i mean.. it /could/ work. but i think you should add 'About'
(like i write about)

Otherwise good job. i'd try to add more onto it. make it more detailedand use examples. =]

x3 Lauren