She Falls

by Christie   Dec 4, 2006


Yesterday, the first and last,
Poision sultry on her lips,
Tears flow, brightly receding,
Following her imperfect kiss.

Resonance plays memories unseen,
Vines creeping over shattered ground,
Shadows rising defiantly so,
Sanity lost with that sound.

Love her angel of despair,
Broken eyes to match her heart,
Shouting not to those who hear,
But those who too are torn apart.

Patience dancing with the calm,
Destroying the little peace of night,
Cobble stones, around her lay,
Reaching grass of death abides.

With night, sequential weakness works,
Black trees loom, silencing all,
Frost covering a blackened earth,
Crying, alone, subdued she falls.

© Christie 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Great job!! i lvoed it you have a very good writing structure! 5/5
    *kaila*

  • 17 years ago

    by Willow

    So beautiful and sad at the same time. i really like ur writting. keep it up.
    love willow xxoo

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ooo. Lovely dark poem. Sorry I haven't been on in a while. And this took so darn long to reply to your request. I haven't had the chance to get on much lately. -sigh-

    Anyways...The flow was excellent. I liked it a lot. It really added to the whole story too. I liked most of the way you described things. It was so well written I wanted to read it again. ^_^. Well done. =) 5/5 xxoo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by timehealsallwounds6

    Wow amazing truly unique in its words

  • 17 years ago

    by KelseyinWonderland

    This was an amazing poem! Keep up the great work. I'll be sure to look at some of your other poetry. Please read some of mine 2 please. Thanks!

    ~K3!$3Y~

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