Wow...i totally loved this...it drew me in and then spit me out at the end...awesome...5/5.

This was an amazing poem! Keep up the great work. I'll be sure to look at some of your other poetry. Please read some of mine 2 please. Thanks!

~K3!$3Y~

Wow amazing truly unique in its words

Ooo. Lovely dark poem. Sorry I haven't been on in a while. And this took so darn long to reply to your request. I haven't had the chance to get on much lately. -sigh-

Anyways...The flow was excellent. I liked it a lot. It really added to the whole story too. I liked most of the way you described things. It was so well written I wanted to read it again. ^_^. Well done. =) 5/5 xxoo

Samantha

So beautiful and sad at the same time. i really like ur writting. keep it up.
love willow xxoo

Great job!! i lvoed it you have a very good writing structure! 5/5
*kaila*