by Midnight Sun Dec 4, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Years ago we sat at the same table |
by Mommy And Me
Well written poem. i really injoyed the read. great work. |
by *Charisma*
I think some parts didn't flow right as you read it, but I love how you kind of go back to the beginning in your last stanza by relating back to sitting at the table, and I loved the completing stanza. nice job! |