Comments : Who Would Have Known

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I think some parts didn't flow right as you read it, but I love how you kind of go back to the beginning in your last stanza by relating back to sitting at the table, and I loved the completing stanza. nice job!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Well written poem. i really injoyed the read. great work.