Simply Put

by Midnight Sun   Dec 4, 2006


If you stay by my side
My wounds may heal
But if you leave me alone
I will never again feel

The way I feel

When I feel your touch
When I hear your song
When I taste your kiss
When I see where I belong
In your eyes

With your eyes

Through your eyes I see calm
Through your heart I see love
Through your mind I see a future
Through that future I see us

I need us

I believe in us becoming one
I believe we'll get through it all
I believe we'll beat the odds
I believe we'll survive every fall

Learn from that fall

Strive not to fall into that trap
Strive for whatever's closest to perfection
Strive to live and love forever
Strive to never lack of affection

Always crave affection

Simply create affection for one another
Simply feel what it right and true
Simply live and die for each other
Simply put ... I love you

(I know the form is a little unconventional but I really hope you like it...if you have any suggestions please feel free to comment on it. I love hearing from others. Thanks! =)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Very good poem! i enjoyed reading this very much! i like the repetition, it added a lot!

    i really don't have it in me to go in detail. im sorry.. but this poem is really good! =D

    i feel like a one liner... ahh so i have to say something.

    to me it seems the stanza breaks, if this were being read aloud would be whispered and that is wicked cool. also,this is my fave part:
    I need us
    I believe in us becoming one
    . it just flowed really well.

    great job!

    xoxoxoxox
    :Lola

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Unconventional my ****!!!
    Hehe, i agree with Laura, this can work as a song as well which is why i love it all the more!
    How do you do it? Your words always flow like water over my tongue...
    Amazing work as always
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Okay...I love the poem overall, but I'm not entirely crazy about the lines inbetween, sometimes they seem to flow with it, and sometimes they don't. But I love the message with it. It's a very good poem, and it's always nice to see something different.
    Charisma*