by Midnight Sun Dec 4, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
If you stay by my side |
Very good poem! i enjoyed reading this very much! i like the repetition, it added a lot! |
by Gem
Unconventional my ****!!! |
by *Charisma*
Okay...I love the poem overall, but I'm not entirely crazy about the lines inbetween, sometimes they seem to flow with it, and sometimes they don't. But I love the message with it. It's a very good poem, and it's always nice to see something different. |