This is so sad! i can really feel the hurt in your words

I like this one a lot it expresses a lot of feeling

~amanda~

This one makes me feel ur pain and i understand u cpmpletely i feel the same way :( caz xx

This is really good, though its not really original. Almost the enitre thing is from the song Immortal by Evanescense. I'm sorry, but you pretty much copied this enitre thing except for like 3 lines. Try something more original. You are pretty good though. You can certainly flow well. Good luck

THAT WAS SOOOO GOOD!! I CAN TOTALLY RELATE!! GREAT JOB!!

Nice job.. I liked it girl.. do more of them so i can read them :P.. anyways it was awsome 5/5