by Gem
What an ending! |
by Cuddles
Charisma, I don't know what to say. This makes me want to cry, it's so sad. This is excellent. Truly, truly excellent. |
by ~me~
I really like this poem especially the fact that the wife dosnt even no that he's cheating on her. its like your waiting for her to find out and feel upset but its not quite sad yet because she dosnt no yet |
by Midnight Sun
That was worded so beautifully! It was so sad yet you never just came out and said what he was doing but it was so well implied no one could tell the difference. And the way you twisted your words....ah! It was just great...keep it up Charisma! |