Comments : Broken Dreams

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    What an ending!
    I normally hate poems on this subject cos on the most part, i will shed a tear because of the matters at hand and although i didn't break tradition after reading this, it was so well written that i don't care.
    Your flow is always impeccable and the imagery is always clear.
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Charisma, I don't know what to say. This makes me want to cry, it's so sad. This is excellent. Truly, truly excellent.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~me~

    I really like this poem especially the fact that the wife dosnt even no that he's cheating on her. its like your waiting for her to find out and feel upset but its not quite sad yet because she dosnt no yet

    very good poem 5/5
    me x x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    That was worded so beautifully! It was so sad yet you never just came out and said what he was doing but it was so well implied no one could tell the difference. And the way you twisted your words....ah! It was just great...keep it up Charisma!
    ~Midnight Sun