This was a great poem, and I loved the meaning behind it. The ending was really awesome as well! The only thing was that your flow was lost in certain places like the last line in your 2nd stanza and 3rd one. I would think about editing those to flow better, but other than that, Excellent poem! 5/5 for sure!
Charisma*

This was a great poem, and I loved the meaning behind it. The ending was really awesome as well! The only thing was that your flow was lost in certain places like the last line in your 2nd stanza and 3rd one. I would think about editing those to flow better, but other than that, Excellent poem! 5/5 for sure!
Charisma*

As I read your poem... memories started to haunt me... I try to bury them... but it's impossible... they never die.
anyways... this is a great piece of poetry

Wow, the morbid feeling is just consuming in this poem, bringing the reader in with each word. very well done, i really like this. Btw, have you ever been to Norway? i have and they call it the "Land of the Midnight Sun" which was your name, just wondering.

Wow...I'm speechless...this was really really good.
You have a lot of talent.
I really enjoyed the imagery and wording in this, it really captured my attention.
I think you did an excellent job.

Yeah. I know how that is. It really sucks. But yeah, I found my guy now so it's not a problem anymore. Although I do still like the dark some times. Thanks for commenting on my poem! You should hear Mark schultz's song"Everything to me"about his birthmother.

-Angel~goddess

This is M&M- i got an account on here, so go check out my poems if you want. Very moving. I love the analogy of the candle entering into your life but then leaving you in darkness. Makes me sorry i wasn't there to support you whenever you felt those things. This is M&M- i got an account on here, so go check out my poems!

Holy Buckets!! 5/5 for sure! I used to feel like this before I met Chris. I loved your flow here. Such an amazing write!!

I rated this poem 5, because it related to me very much, your peom are very nice! You have a true beauty in them xxx

Beautiful poem! I love it! keep up the good work!

Once again, i am enthralled by your work, i can relate to all the beauty, betrayel and sorrow in every line in this, captivating...yes the images you wrote about may have been haunting to some, but it was everyday life to me, so comforting to read a poem, and feel such strong emotions and know that you aren't the only one that has/or is going through the same thing...HELL YEAH!....
john