I adore you *Revised*

by Matt   Dec 5, 2006


Looking for the key across the land,
searching far and wide,
no where on earth to be found,
our hearts must soon collide.

and for centuries ive been trying,
no closer then the start,
in search for the gigantic key,
to your enormous heart.

and maybe its just me ,
maybe im to shy,
afraid of your rejection,
your the sun that lights my sky.

in my dreams at night,
in my thoughts at day,
together with you tonight and tomorrow,
not one more tiny delay.

and maybe its not coming,
but I sure hope it is,
Its time for us to try something new,
because I know ,
that you know ,
that I adore you.

I didnt llike the original one so I revised it with some changes hoping that it flows better. Please rate it and leave comments. Ill do the same for you.

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