Make me smile?

by Calli   Dec 5, 2006


People see my smile
and they think that I'm alright,
but the truth is that I'm dieing
while trying to win this fight.

this fight is called life
and it can get real rough,
but I'm trying to hold together
and I'm trying to be tough.

if people knew the actual truth
maybe they'd feel bad,
all I'd ask for is them to make me smile
and stop me from being so sad.

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  • 17 years ago

    by iam not hurt i lost u im hurt i lost the person i thought u were

    Thanks for letting me know i didn't write the poem! FUK i had no idea, really thankyou...what would people do without people like YOU going around making accusations about people's poems, good job, it must feel good to be you. just so you no the person that did write that poem was someone dear to me and she is now not with us, just wanted to share a great poem with others.and a liitle advice- next time you go around telling people they didn't write something, how about you do some REASERCH on the poem to see for sure they didn't write it!!!
    and no thankyou its people like you who keep me amused.

    PS All that aside your poems are not half bad good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Things will get better! Your writing is Great! I know it is a good release. Good job!

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