When You Love Someone

by shela   Dec 5, 2006


When you Love someone
all you want is them
all you want is to hold them just for a while
all you want is that they would stay with you and very go
all you want is to see them smile
and your Love grows everyday
and when they are not with you all you do is think about them
and it drives you crazy
but when you lose them over something
then all want to do is cry...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    THis poem is totally true....
    I like it very much

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem and very true. I love this poem for that reason. Keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Great read! You have loads of talent. I like the emotians throughtout this one. Had an ok flow. Keep writing! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow i can defiantly relate to this very much. i feel the same way. i'm sure a lot of people do. keep writing you have talent! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    You have excellent use aof words in all of your poems, you just need to work on making them longer and the structure of the poem it self. Other than that, the flow is good. Kepp up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

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