Thinking Of You

by shela   Dec 5, 2006


I think of you night and day
Will it forever be this way?
I pray that it won't but then again,
You see me as nothing more than a friend

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Short but sweet!!! good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Too short. That's the only problem I have with it. It was so great with just what you have, though it could be excellent, if you would write more. Though I do think that you got quite a bit of emotions out in this one. =] Keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. Though I do think that it should be a little longer. Other then that please don't change it. I can relate to this poem. I like it. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Really short like everyone has said, but the words used made it a great read! Had a good flow, but seriously i think you need to add another stanza to it. It just felt incomplete...
    Still good job!
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww wow this is really short, but it said so much in those few words. i really liked the rhmying in it. great job! 5/5

    ~Kristina

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