I realy really really like this poem.. keep it up ...thanx 4 the comments but i do have a feeling the end is very soon 4 me sorry

Another moving poem. So brilliant with such emotion. I especially liked the ending - made me catch my breath! Take care.

Kelly
xx

I agree with Kelly
The ending finished off the poem perfectly.
This poem was so full of heart yet sadness..
But most of your best poems are because you have a unique way with words.
5/5
*Gem*

Loved this poem it was filled with so much emotion and had a sad feel to it, i love reading your poems. you do have a good way with words =]=]=]

~*~Jen~*~

Wow i loved the writing on the grave
was very pwerfull
5/5 very gd
me x x x

Such deep in meaning. i like how u made the twist at the end. the poem mad me think. i lov it:)

Im confused and sick but email me. I have something I think you'll like.

I like this poem its sad but its really good. I gave it a 5/5.

Everyone at some time feels this way. and i hate it. its not wat is supposed to happen.

David

Xcellent poem, I like how your words touches your readers. I'm sorry for not reading something of yours sooner. Thanks 4 the comment it means alot...XP

Amazing poem. such emotion, and very good rhyming and flow.

keep up the good work, i really enjoy reading your poems!

Aww very emotional this is my fav part
Those words will cut you like a knife,
You'll think it wasn't fair,
But on your shoulder theres a hand,
He'll always will be there.
5/5

Im not an incredibly deep person but i really liked this one, well...it was pretty much awesome actually, great job