by dollwithafrown Dec 5, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Trekking along the never-ending road |
by cierra
It was an amazing poem, one of my favorites. hope you keep writing. |
Wonderful poem. It had a get message, and was filled with inspiration. No matter what happens we can't let the bad things in life brig us down. The flow and rhymes were both good. I really like the last staza. Great job! |
by Rachel RTVW
Nice job on this. I particularly like the last 2 stanzas. Beautiful write! |
by Bridgette
I love this poem. It is filled with so much happiness and strength. I really liked the 4th stanza. That one seemed to really prove the strength within the speaker. I loved all of this. The flow was really good and held up well. 5/5 |
by Cindy
You are a very talented writer. This wasa really good poem. I loved the ending. Excellent! |