Wow really really good
i love what your writing about too
brill poem
me x x x x

An excellent read! Had a great flow, and very meaningful. The vocab usage was excellent! Love the ending, a amazing poem! Keep it up! xx

Great... and wonderful.
good word choice...
I really do like this poem.
5/5

I loved this.
I found it very inspiring, my favourite part was the last stanza.

You did a wonderful job on this.

Great poem,growing older always makes ones outlook different,through experience,memories,sadness and joy.
The sky is the limit5

Great write, i enjoyed reading it. you have talent
xxxxx

I loved it!! It was beautifully written and I think it flowed nicely. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

This was so amazing. it had great vocabulary, a beautiful message, and it was just a wonderful piece. great job.

travis

Awesome poem. I think the only thing you can do to this is add some puncuation. Other than that, this was fracking awesome! I love t his part:

Because my life is now a highway
And I'm riding all day long
No more sorrows left from yesterday
To keep me from going strong

Great Rhyming.

5/5

I wanted to say that though this poem didn't place, I did enjoy how you could feel the person becoming stronger by the minute. I liked that, and it had a pretty good flow and rhyme. Though the first line in your second stanza should say lodged instead of logged I believe. Of course, it's possible they both work! lol
Nice job! I love the quote in your profile! How true it is.
Charisma*

Straight from the first stanza, i'd knew i'd like this poem, well done!!!! 10/10
Choi,
Darling! xxx :)

You are a very talented writer. This wasa really good poem. I loved the ending. Excellent!

I love this poem. It is filled with so much happiness and strength. I really liked the 4th stanza. That one seemed to really prove the strength within the speaker. I loved all of this. The flow was really good and held up well. 5/5

Nice job on this. I particularly like the last 2 stanzas. Beautiful write!

Wonderful poem. It had a get message, and was filled with inspiration. No matter what happens we can't let the bad things in life brig us down. The flow and rhymes were both good. I really like the last staza. Great job!

Keep writing!
Cayce

It was an amazing poem, one of my favorites. hope you keep writing.