This is My Wish

by SADADDY   Dec 5, 2006


This family has been broken
I am trying to make it whole

But we keep getting resist ants
From those outside forces that oppose

I can only do so much
without any help

I ask that we all work together
As a family of one

In order for us
to become this whole family again

This is my wish
to the man above

That he will allow us
To become whole once again

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwh, I really liked this, I thought it was beautifully written.
    The pain behind the words are easy to see and the whole poem is filled with so much meaning and depth.
    You did a wonderful job.

  • 17 years ago

    by always wanted a friend like u_lenise_

    Scott!!!
    I feel your pain and know that i know how you feel it must be so hard...
    keep up the good work though

  • 17 years ago

    by DeadlyObsession

    Greatt poem and thankks for the comment.. i can relate in a literal family way and in a spiritual wayyy

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Wow!! It's very strong yet so true I like it.

    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    This is a touching poem. and that is about the best way i can sum it up 5/5

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