Comments : Three

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    This is a great poem, and I love how you carry the three throughout the poem...great questions, and it's so sweet. And thank you for the nice comment on my poem. I hate it that stuff like that happens. It's not right. Marriage is supposed to last forever. That's what God desired. But in today's world, where everything is upside down, most times it doesn't. So I wrote about it. Thanks for the comment and all of yours! Always appreciated!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I wish i could give "excellent" atleast three times... ;o)

    Ur themes are just so unique and i am getting tired of saying this now...but then what else to say....everytime u simply surprise me with the way u write and abt the things u write...amazing..love reading ur work

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by ~me~

    "Will we still be in a state of bliss?"
    loved this bit of this poem
    very very good and i loved how you did the 3 hours, 3 days, 3 weeks.... bit
    me x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by masked_senses

    Will we...when will the line of the present throw future into forgotten past...You can never know...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    Nice...well done, once again!

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I love all he STANZA ANOTHER FAVORITE..this is just jamm packed with love. esp. the ending your guy is so lucky to have a gurl like you...keep it up hunn

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Also an interesting twist, i never would thought of that using the word three i might do sumnthing lik that if u dont mind but wit a different number and my own twiist.

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Lovely! The threes were a good twist! Lovely job babe!
    xoxo

    P.S. & I love to hear you were jotting down notes for a poem about me! That makes me feel good :)