by *Charisma*
This is a great poem, and I love how you carry the three throughout the poem...great questions, and it's so sweet. And thank you for the nice comment on my poem. I hate it that stuff like that happens. It's not right. Marriage is supposed to last forever. That's what God desired. But in today's world, where everything is upside down, most times it doesn't. So I wrote about it. Thanks for the comment and all of yours! Always appreciated! |
I wish i could give "excellent" atleast three times... ;o) |
by ~me~
"Will we still be in a state of bliss?" |
Will we...when will the line of the present throw future into forgotten past...You can never know...5/5 |
Nice...well done, once again! |
I love all he STANZA ANOTHER FAVORITE..this is just jamm packed with love. esp. the ending your guy is so lucky to have a gurl like you...keep it up hunn |
Also an interesting twist, i never would thought of that using the word three i might do sumnthing lik that if u dont mind but wit a different number and my own twiist. |
Lovely! The threes were a good twist! Lovely job babe! |