This is well done! You have a very special way with words.

"That the harmonious tones of love cannot be kept inside"

I agree with Cindy. The structure of this piece allowed every word to have it's place.
Excellently done!
5/5
*Gem*

I love how this poem was written. It's like I could feel everything going on. i really liked this. Very different type of writing...from most poems i've read on here. An excellent write. 5/5

Take care,

-` Liz

I liked this one very much. . crisp, direct, well done